Black Poetry : Freed! (Dedicated to.....)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Apr 4, 2004.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've freed myself!
    From dreaming
    From hoping
    Waiting in vain for you
    To see
    Me
    The one possessing
    The love you search for
    In Vain

    I swell
    Inside
    With love
    For you
    To have it ignored
    Taken for granted
    Played with
    Trampled upon
    Misused
    Never validated
    Never substantiated
    Never reciprocated
    Unexplored
    Lying dormant
    Seeping away slowly with passing days
    Without you
    Yes, you're here
    But really gone
    Mentally
    In the arms
    Of another
    *sigh*

    Yet I'm free now
    To love
    To be loved
    Appreciated
    Validated
    "Un" lonely
    Focused
    And free....
    Free from you
    Free from the chains
    Of a so- called love!
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes ya poem
    feelin the vibe
    soul-deep
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free from da undying spell of love in a mental vision
    this was tytely written poet !
     
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    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very beautiful

    if i had a bro a didnt know anything about it it would be you
    you just got a way of writing thats really unique
    but it really sticks to the soul like hot grits
    boy keep doing it

    hold it up
    pump ya fist
    brak the chains
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...you nailed this here, that feeling of loving in vain, gotta snap out of that feeling that binds you to disappointment. Flow on.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    Free yourself...from that so called love
    I like this one
    a very nice vibe twision
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love to each and every one of you!
    The love you all give is needed right now
    Trust me!!!!!!!

    Mzblkangel- Thanks for feeling my soul...you're simply a treasure

    Rich- Bruh your encouraging spirit is so uplifting to us all...what would the fam do without you...one love

    Mistaliberator- That was one of the kindest things said to me in "cyber- world" Thanks so much. We are brothers...it's official! :shades:

    Watz- You're so right in what you say. I love the way you comment on the work in this fam....you seem to see the heart of what poets write...you're a jewel...one love

    Nita- My queen....I'm so in awe of you. Thanks for the compliment on the vibe. I'm about ready to show them how Nita and Twision do it...you wit' me???...I know you are :luvv:
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    this was indeed
    a very heavy script
    goodness
    flow on
    feelin you
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Blue...this freedom is costing me a whole lot
    But I know I have to be free
    Sometimes you have to make up your mind
    Whether you will live or die
    I choose life....for what it's worth :look:
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha best believe me...this freedom is RARE
    you are blessed baby and this was HOT :)
     
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