Black Poetry : Free...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jun 2, 2005.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Within the starz
    Far off in the north
    As the shores of peace
    Floods with joy
    One day I know
    I will be free
    Standing firm as a tree
    Delicate as a rose
    Blooming in my own
    In my dreams
    I know it’s a place
    To where I will be free

    High above the starz
    Pass the moon within shores
    Of a peaceful ocean
    I fly….
    Free to live
    Where love never ends
    And the sun smiles
    All the daylong
    For one day I will be free

    I was created
    Out of darkness
    Formed in my own
    Reborn to the heavens
    As I breathe life
    Giving love and peace
    Foreseen…

    But for now
    I will dream of that one day
    For you and I
    Peace will be among us
    Chains will be gone
    Mentality will be stronger
    And the peace I seek
    Shall be our gift…

    Inside my dreams
    This place was made for
    You and I
    Yesterday have been
    Replaced with today
    That brings a new day
    ………..of tomorrow

    (c) 2005
    NewDay
    NewVision
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Free and all things once binding have vanished forever. This is a great flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely enjoyed the freedom ride of this uplift
    thankz for the journey Angel cakes !
     
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    way to be heard

    That's what I'm talking about...very nice scribe...especially loved the ending
    "Yesterday have been
    Replaced with today
    That brings a new day
    ………..of tomorrow"

    Powerful

    One_Love
     
  5. 1poetsought

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    It's a new day today, free for all!

    Go ahead...

    With your bad self.
     
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    this was beautiful.........i love mzblack....

    essence of excellence
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this. I definitely like the symbolism and imagery going on in this piece especially. Great flow, but then again....what else is there to expect? You always do great things. Much love mzblkangel. Much love.
     
  8. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MBA...

    very nice, sweetie. :D
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I read between the lines
    This is a deep scribe sister
    No holds no shackles sister
    Much Love Poet
     
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