Black Poetry : ~FREE~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Oct 26, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There wasn't enough time to stop them...
    There couldn't be enough ways to move around them...
    The weight of the world pressed against my eyelids and
    made my nose burn with so much emotion.
    I pressured thoughts of other thing in and
    through my mind in an attempt to...keep them
    in.
    To keep my mind off of the hurt, the pain...
    But to no avail....

    Within minutes, the tears fell...
    and they continued to pour down my face.
    Ridges and ravines were carved in that place.
    My eyes were bleaker than an impending storm,
    and my lips were a thin line of repressed fear, anger,
    love and loss.
    This black rain fell and I hunkered by the window paine
    tracing the journey each rain-drop made.

    Last night I cried.
    I shed so many tears and emptied my soul
    of all of its impurities.
    I removed the poisons of this world...
    and gained some measure of restoration,
    no, some measure of completeness and peace.

    I...feel...free

    Copyright 2004
    ~PropheticNsyght
     
  2. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate to this piece....I'm sure I need that type of cleansing more times than not.

    very nice poem!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing better then freedom this was a nice poem and well scribed
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for your love. :dj: :dj: :dj:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bruh you are too special to me and I love you. :chef: :chef: :chef: :chef: :chef:
     
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    Heck yeah, sister. Emotional release is easier said than done. This is beautifully expressed.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for this gemp. You are truly a blessing!
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful. To be able to struggle, conquer, and come out free....gotta be the best feeling in the world. Once again, beautiful description!!
     
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    Sometimes that's exactly what we need, to let all the sorrow just flow, lucky for us that ours can drop onto paper....
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    such a breath of fresh air, release is good for the soul. nice drop