Black Poetry : FREE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, May 12, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It appears that I have been
    lost.
    Unable to speak or
    to see.
    I have wandered around in a maze
    of confusion with
    no way out.
    The sunlight was hidden
    from me.
    Only dark skies and
    quiet breezes.
    And suddenly like
    the dawn of time
    the awakening of man
    and the eruption of
    the valcanoes.
    I was made aware
    of my surrondings
    and able to feel
    and to sense what I was
    unable to sense.
    I was reborn bought
    anew and released
    to live.
    Like a Pheonix rising
    from the ashes I now
    soar to my highest potential
    and I am FREE.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thatgirl, Great write......i feel in it the dynamic movement from the pains and limits of being held back and down and moving into enlightenment and FREEDOM........Bustin' Loose....

    Peace and Blessings
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you . I have been gone for a while life it seems has thrown me a few curve balls. And I couldn't think let alone write. But I feel free to flow now.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just the feeling of being freee is wonderful, very beautiful poem sis, I love your sttttyle
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Free is such a strong word
    I'm feeling this piece loving the feeling:wave: :peace:
     
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    Had you not been lost...you would have never been found...enjoy your findings, it's a wonderful thing to see the light...^5
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life can be like that, getting hit with those unforseen blows. Nice to read you again, you could feel the release from your words.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow u created a masterpiece
    flow on sistah
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great scribe
    likes how you pose
    this one
    thanks for sharing.....Angel
     
  10. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you queen,watz,$$R$$,Blk,and Sensual. I am so glad you are enjoying it.
     
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