Black Poetry : free

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by bahati, Nov 2, 2003.

  1. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    i'm back at this place
    the place it all began
    my transformation
    terrifying alteration
    'horrification'
    'blurrification'
    the place of my birth
    my birth place
    never ending maze
    with endless branched ways
    asking myself thousands
    of torturing questions
    i can take thousands of
    years and will only come up
    with vague suggestions
    but giving up? can i, do i
    have a choice?
    can i rely calmly on this
    inner voice?
    whispering in my ear
    of fear, and rats and races
    i sit silently
    after all these gazing faces
    but am i really silent?
    no in me it's boiling violent
    wanna yell, shout, scream, cry,
    run and destroy till it's all done
    freaking out, inside out,
    backing out, tie it down to a
    chair - my life
    it's gotta stay here
    don't want it to come with me
    hell no - i finally wanna be free
    angels singing: BE FREE -
    ETERNALLY - GLORIOUSLY
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this even got a little beat with it..
    much love on dis...be free...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful flow had a jammin tone to it
    flow on happy ya back in full force
     
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