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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PurpleMoons, Sep 18, 2003.

  1. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    trapped against the grids of an eternal inhale
    longing to release longing to prevail
    determined to find the solutition to my madness
    searching for the key breaking down the walls of unhappiness
    why cant I breath what happened to my exhale
    who stole my serenity
    who has locked away my identity
    I wont go down like that
    I will fight to the death I will get my source back
    like the mighty Thor raises his cast iron hammer
    my spirit will clash down on the heads of my perpetraitors
    defending what is left of me
    protecting GODS gift
    Life........Life........life.......My life
    Give me back whats mine or perish
    no more exhaling in short quick intervals
    today I exhale in full blown
    like the manmade disease AIDS
    my wrath will be known
    Today I exhale
    Today I breath
    Today I take back what is mine
    Today I will be free
    Today my spirit will ride on the crisp motions of the invisible wind
    Today my mind will fly with ease
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    fly dear child fly !!!
    happy to see u back purplemoons
    dis was tyte scribing sis.
     
  3. PurpleMoons

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    soaring high upon the mountain tops Rich. Today I be free!

    Thanks Rich! Your reply means alot (smiles)
     
  4. PurpleMoons

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    Hay! :wave: XXPANTHAXX The taste of freedom the ultimate exhale. thankyou I'm happy you liked it.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *applause*

    I'm diggin this, PurpleMoons. :)
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY Purple is back:)
    gurl i missed this so much :)
    shes baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack :)
    :wave:
     
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    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this piece. It remind me of my piece " Free Verse" Write on Poet. Bless
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice flow
     
  9. PurpleMoons

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    Thank you Gempis, I been checkin out your pieces and They are all that. Will be looking for more.

    Hay Triniti gurl! Whats up? Thank you for the love sister. ((((Triniti))))

    Thank you PloeMorphic! It do remind me of your piece. Our minds must have linked at so point.
     
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    Thank you Mzblkangel! Hey everybody! Iv'e just been touched by an Angel.
     
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