Black Poetry : Free

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by amberly, Apr 3, 2003.

  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I
    rested
    my burdens
    between the creases
    of his lips.
    delivering
    me from vexation
    performing
    miracles on my body
    he
    sipped morality
    from my
    love

    I
    parted
    walls of liking.
    fulfillment
    vibrated throughout
    my veins
    shocking the anxiety
    that once was
    buried deep inside
    of me.
    sucking no concerns
    from the
    pores of his skin
    I
    savored
    the seasoning
    he tasted so
    free…





    ©2003amberly
     
  2. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hotep

    this joint is hot. Write on..... Poet
     
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    Dag...now I remember why the word free keeps resonating in my mind when I try to write for "Infinity's Skin". It's this piece! Gorgeous, my friend. And I'm trying desperately to remember what "free" tastes like.

    Serenity...
    Bran
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeeeeeee! water please!
    dis was too tyght flow on
     
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    Talent so sexy seems scandalous!

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    This is very sexy....very! I can dig it!
     
  7. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall for reading my work
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooowwwwweeeee gal !
    I have to agree : Sexy is a great word to discribe this peice

    Nice
    Natasha
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice.
    Now you got me wanting to feel "free". Dang girl I've still got 6hours before I get to go home to my him.
    Great piece.

    *Emma*
     
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