Black Poetry : free write/style

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Oct 31, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i spit fire
    like a lit lighter
    reader's catch flames when I ignite
    but i never overheat or perspire
    my flows like water, smooth as silk
    rich like chocolate, healthy as milk
    im @ the top of the food chain
    i stand over lames like stilts
    im tyte as an asian
    keep the wit shrp & heart racing
    im like the 2 for 1 deal
    half lady, half amazing
    too good to be true, but u cant touch or feel
    i roll over speed bumps like chromed out wheels
    im like a gun when i blast off
    i pierce and kill
    my mental's deadly, my pen is dangerous
    i never hold back, i aim n bust
    me n Ginuwine got one thing in common
    we're "ssoooooo anxious"
    im just waiting for something to test me! lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyteeeeeeeeeeeee

    whatch out for the bite
    dis flow was awesomely tyte :spinn:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just want y'all to know that this is even more dope when you hear her read it out loud. :D
     
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    nice ....
    cant wait to hear her read it...
    it got fire up in it....
    niice
     
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    spit dat flow gurl.....
    peace
    khasm
     
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    flow with it
    to the floor
    liking this
    letting it pour :)
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh wow...this was hot to death. Nice flow queen.

    blak
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankx for tha "Hot Ice"
    One Love
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww!!

    how sweet is that... thanks yall. glad u can feel my lil freestyle. im no pro, but i try lol
     
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