Black Poetry : free word

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mistaliberator, Mar 26, 2004.

  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i mean its open for a callabo so if u r infact intrested just go ahead and drop three lines and we will begn from their



    I RELEASE THESE WORDS
    TO BE HEARD
    AND IF I SEND
    I POTRAY MY SELF IN IT
    TOOK A LITTLE LONGER THAN MINUTES
    BUT IM NOT
    SCARED ITS ALL FREE
    INFACT ITS ALL ME
    AND WHAT I SEE
    I NEVER DRIVE TO BE
    PUBLICLY THE PUSH ME INTO THE VERY WEAK WALLS OF INSANITY
    BUT I WONT RESIST
    EVEN THOUGH THEY MAY TRY TO LIQUIFY MY THOUGHTS
    I STAYED IN PLACE NEVER DECIDED TO WALK
    EXISTING FOR NOW
    IN CRITICAL CONDITION
    I GUESS
    IM STUCK HERE
    FOR A WHILE
    (ITS NOT FINISHED)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    not stucked
    just standing still
    as i knoweth of thy
    directional maze of
    sweetness that allow
    da motions to wave forward
    what is painted is thy self
    a picture of greatness
    as it continue to leak to da page
    flow on continue da journey

    very nicely openly done .............
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps not done, but you conveyed the feeling of being stuck quite well.
     
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