Black Poetry : Free spirit/my life us together Pt.II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Even through this joy i fine
    the essence of your beings
    even deeper then i ever knew
    cascading with body & soul
    I would be honored to take u in
    the circle, this symbol of love
    through eternity from the beauty
    of it's symmetry but i know this
    wave of lost foreverness and the
    founding of hope too from the vision
    i rest my eyez inside the circle
    ur the subtle of my universe repersent
    a promise a hope and reasons this
    become my hero in the depth of u
    see belove pain , pleasure existing
    sorrow and suffering have given relief
    the tention move pass my today
    from this ideality to reality
    this elegant desires has keep this
    flame of fire higher from the perplex
    purpose i know is how this mystery
    was begot and my love flutter free
    the spirit moving through grace and
    savior , I need u to look pass
    what u see and how u feel and kiss
    the depth of my intriguing fascination
    let the empitness solitude distress dem
    as i am your protector , profoundly we
    now can rest in my slumber within my
    chambers of love and just maybe
    this time u can love me too from my
    life of free spirit and us together .

    Dyamondluv 2005
    Nu~wave Creation
    Ink productional Inc.
    $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one was even deeper than the first, whew...Okay...I think what one sees can make a mind fear the possibilities of what was seen. But despite that, the love that a heart feels, is constant and unchanging, it never left. This goes fathoms beneath the surface, wonderfully written flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u from my heart sista watz
    as i journey into TYME freely on this spirit ride
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know I've said it before, but I love this deep side of you, $$RICH$$. Bring it out anytime you wanna. :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u my sista sometime i have to let it leak out to canvas
    deep but sweetly most humbled by your words and love u give
    what a caring sista u are luv ya !
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw, thanks honey. Love you. :smooch:
     
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    ya got me all fuzzy inside u better stop it.
    or i'll be looking for u , big thankz gempis
    wow!
     
  8. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again, excellent read.

    <floats in>

    Ah, the heart is a well of emotions as deep as the soul. Another well expressed piece that goes together well with the first. Loved the free spirited flow of each piece. Your wording and phrasing accents the title and pulls the reader deeper into the internal abyss of sheltered moments. Loved the expression!

    keep the words moving

    peace&1luv

    <floats out>
     
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    i am deep vibing of this wow baby this was awesome i could feel every word flow head on....loving it!!!!
     
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    thankz legendof 1 spirit for the love and sweet reply

    thankz Angel happy u can feel the motion of it within
     
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