Black Poetry : Free spirit / my life us together (final chapter)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From the stilliness of night
    your love set sail a light
    in rapture of my beings
    my heart soars higher in waves
    i strain to fine words that
    capture your essence yet i know
    my heart , my eyes glaze deeper
    even i have lost way but never
    my compassion and the divided
    soul maybe but inner touch we have
    when fatigue sloths the brain
    and u fine the words only to be
    deleted i glaze out my window
    in search of the winds that carry u
    closer and many times i've sent
    my token upon your feet
    i notice ur the beauty deep in my
    sleep of slumber , it's an artist hope
    from his dream that u are and will be
    buttercup the diamond eyes
    and sparkle of my heart i confess
    a second chance upon the what soon
    to be alter and give my devotional
    unconditional love and cherish your
    presence my life is bedded inside u
    and my hope i scream wit bliss and
    to taste the morsal of your lips as we
    partake in the moment that carry us
    above into a self held hamlet
    the memories linger forever from this
    happiness the charm whispers yo name
    i cry in the grace of u my life of us
    together is beyond the found friendship
    we become hopalong sassy & cisco love
    dancing in the radiant of tomorrow
    u may not know me now but i am he
    whom u sought and beckon in the night
    i am the dream u felt and the pillow
    beneath your head caressing u to sleep
    that very chill was my handz holding u
    in comfort the gentle wind was my
    loyality love brisking your face kissing
    those tears way i am the free spirit
    my love and us together as i close this
    chapter another one begin my beloveth
    we are one yet two souls read me and
    understand i am !


    Dyamondluv 2005
    Nu ~ wave Creation
    Ink productional Inc.
    $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Free spirit blowing
    cool crisp snap in the air
    capturing a love
    that has been there
    and will remain
    beyond the scope
    of what has been seen
    flowing onward with hope

    Whew....This gem glistened quite brightly my brotha.
     
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    with my heart
    this second chance
    will take us to the alter of love
    feel my love as i feel yours
    move me cross the winds
    as i close my eyes i feel the touch of thee
    knowing your meant for me as i was made for you
    freindship held deep
    the depths of my soul cries
    as my heart yearns baby i love you
    my spirit shouts...

    feeling this most def..a soul deep experience took place
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz for the hit and flow

    thankz Angel for the visit and drop on dis
     
  5. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A perfect ending

    <floats in>

    What a display of passion in verse! This poem is a wonderful ending to an endearing journey. Really enjyed reading each one of your "Free Spirit" poems. Excellent Work!

    Keep the words moving

    peace&1luv

    <floats out>
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz a million for the visit and love
     
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    Just as beautiful and deep as the first and second chapters, $$RICH$$ness. :flamet:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thankz sista for the love on dis here ...
     
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    peace,

    you never cease to amaze brotha $$RICH$$................seems like you keep outdoing yourself with every scribe........

    flow on brotha!!

    peace
     
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    wow...the end was great...let me step back and view
    the previous joints....tyte

    one love
    khasm
     
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