Black Poetry : Free Myself

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Finally I got a chance to write something :em2300:

    Disclaimer there are a few borrowed lyrics in here...if one happens to catch them don't mention anything it was intended


    Free Myself

    Imprisoned for prostitution his resolution for love
    High strung so the boy slung his heart out to eat bullets
    So fitting that they came from such a sly fox
    Guilty as charged was he she wasn’t pressed by the cops
    All these recollections occurring in the moment mentally
    So delusional the floor cracks gone is reality
    He now resides behind bars as he hides within a depressed high
    Truth and lies speak of lies and yet he’s too strong to cry
    Who am I his innocence to speak that which shall fall upon deaf ears
    The walking dead are buried alive out of sight out of mind out of sound
    His soul resonates beneath the ground
    But there’s hope as he clings onto the bars in agony
    On the cusp of insanity the one above us all observes
    All one can do is pray and that y’all both here these words
    If we can break down those walls to set you free
    we would, cause we out here and we miss you
    If we could build a ladder that tall to come and see you
    we would, cause we down here
    And we miss you.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow that was heavy dude seem so real are you locked away? got into this felt it dawg
     
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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    nicely done.
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No im in college lol the poem is part of a series im writing based off experiences n emoitions i have felt at one point or another.

    But thank you
     
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    dawn of a dreadful twist in a mental state of mind
    this was deep and well felt bruh !
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "he is free Because ,His God is with Him"'


    from the movie "joseph"


    from the bible..




    nice poem




    Blessings !
     
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