Black Poetry : Free from worry, free from you!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Free from worry, free from you!
    I used to be sad , used to be blue.
    Sex with my ex...yep I did.
    Every saturday for a year.
    Til I said that's enough my dear.
    How do I go from wife to part time
    lover...the only thing we have in
    common besides the kids was all
    done undercover.

    Free from worry, free from you!
    I used to be down, and longed for you.
    Now, I have cut you out of my hair.
    And I am singing and dancing without
    a care. The love we had was like a
    movie, twist and turns and unhappy
    endings. The time we spent together
    alone I am now spending.
    But, its' all right!

    Free from worry, free from you!
    And you ask me what am I gonna do.
    "I'm already doing !", I reply.
    Learning to live without you.
    My days are full of building my business.
    Writing my book and airing my laundry.
    My new lover is my poetry.
    It never fails me or disappoints me.

    Free from worry, free from you!
    Sure of the things I want to do.
    Keeping my head on straight,
    so I don't miss the Heavenly gate.
    And on the "true love" I will wait.
    A new way of wearing my hair.
    Each day I start with a wish and
    a prayer. No longer wishing that
    you were here and there.
    Caressing me and deceiving me
    simultaneously...Nope,now I
    am finally free!

    Free from worry, free from you!
    Days to do only what I want to do.
    No one asking "Whats for dinner"!
    Since I left you , I even go thinner.
    Not from sadness or depression.
    Just a natural progression.
    Emerging like a butterfly.
    My wings now take me to the sky.
    Everything is falling into place.
    My business name is all over the place.
    Even writing a book , maybe two.
    And all because I am free of you!
    THANK YOU!
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed well felt i've been there before
    and good to be free from the hold up
    the main one ,, free to be free
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Super Moderator!

    Always the first to show some love! And always flying high above...you send that HIgher love!
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    indeed much love to ya sistah
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta give props where props are deserved, and you deserve them here. Sounds like a page out of my life's script. You expressed this feeling of freedom so well.
     
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    I like this all this free stuff make me wanna ask God for some wings lol
     
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