Black Poetry : Free Chill

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Free my ***** chill once accused of assualt

    But it aint his fault we all got our struggles

    Tussling with demons with good reason

    No wonder why he was charged with treason

    Play double agent to those in ya inner circle like they foes doesn't make sense

    Whats worse was the rape charges

    You had the nerve to say it was me to cover the fact

    That u stole my innocence but to top off was the charges of abuse

    The truth in which you can't face knowing that its fact

    Did what u did with the hopes that i'd never comeback

    In the same instance in which you stole my innocence

    You locked me in the room n athough i eventually was freed

    I walked a lonely road unsure of who i was to be

    Emoitions like bitterness deprived me of my happiness

    All this time i was afraid to turn you in cause of what you did

    But yet there came a time i had to go for mine seek justice

    The strength i mustered but seeing you again left me flusterd

    In fear the tears came but Courage i weild

    On the witness stand i testify the young boy who too shy to speak

    Gives total acess in how chill ****** him over

    Chill tries to say it was the liquor he wasn't walking around sober

    Futile excuse to blemish truth i stand as the verdict is handed down

    Shining down in vengence has chill is handed a life sentence

    Victory is achieved but a feeling lingers in me

    As if im wrong for accusations i question was it really him

    well the lights were dim so i don't know

    Deeper for the truth i search go back to the day of hurt i travel

    Thru exploration of my mentals the light shedded

    That he wasn't the guilty suspect at hand

    I was my own crook i preplexed myself into the hole i was in

    Allowed myself to sink deeper played the role of the grim reaper

    Its only now that i see a clear path

    But the verdict was handed down i hope its not too late to change the past

    So i come before asking please say you will

    That you'll free my ***** chill...Free my ***** chill
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    meditating...

    as we grow, we come to realize that, IF WE WANT TO DO THE RIGHT THING, WE HAVE TO PUT OUR PAST BEHIND US. that means, putting those friends who are into that other world, behind us as well. it's not about turning your back on WHERE YOU'RE FROM, it's about becoming that person you want to be. like an addict who's trying to overcome his addiction, he stays away from temptation.

    PERSONALLY, i'm not about going to jail for anyone. and A TRUE FRIEND wouldn't let you take the rap for something HE DID. on the other hand, we wouldn't want to accuse our friends FALSELY...just to free ourselves.

    COMPELLING FLOW.
     
  3. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks....This actually has more of a metaphorical meaning

    Chill represents all the negativity in my past...all the bitterness anger n what not tht i felt

    But in the end i cnt totally put chill @ fault for what happened a lot of it was me
     
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    decipherx1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) Nice work!
     
  5. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often we hold our past in our future and we sometime need to chill away from
    awesome post
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tru @ rich n thanks
     
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