Black Poetry : Freaks come out at night- funny i guess

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  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freaks come out at nite

    She strutted into view and demanded my attention.
    My body froze completely, I felt so much tension.
    She was everything I liked physically, seemingly a perfect vision.
    Tall, thick, plus a deep chocolate complexion…

    But did I mention it was dark outside?
    Well keep that in mind as you hear the rest of my story…
    Where was I…oh yeah
    Tall, thick, plus a deep chocolate complexion…

    But she was far away so
    I needed further inspection.
    I wanted to talk to her then
    But chose not to when
    As she came closer and closer
    I noticed the rest of her tackily dressed friends
    Wearing stilettos, pumps, short skirts and wigs.
    What's worse is- they weren't women.
    I took a closer look at her as she walked with them…
    And because of her Adams apple, decided she was a man.
    I walked away fast, then eventually ran.
    Things like this only happen, to north side Chicagoans.
    ( The north side of Chicago is notoriously – homosexual-not that I have anything agaisnt homosexuals)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed but it has spill from North to south as well west
    of Chi and cross cities / states and our nation
    freakiness abound at night ............tyte drop
     
  3. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jump: That was funny! Nice poem
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hi: funny poem...lol, enjoyed the piece


    keep the flow goin

    Mz.soull aka prizefighter16
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ewwwww, that would have started a fight, ho-me don't play dat

    hahahahahhahaha


    DSS
     
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    Earftones Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was funny, Some Jerry Springer type ish
    Peace
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    real funny,man
    i like this piece
     
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