Khasm13 : freakin the critique....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    hmmmmmmmm...how should i say this?
    wait...let me add this song to my playlist...

    ok...
    here we go...

    yo...some poets be green and some be seasoned
    some just poets on paper and some into ear please'n
    some poets like it best when you cry and some like it best when your cheese'n
    all i know is that if you stay in your own world
    you can commit poetic treason

    for this particular reason...

    it takes a village to raise a child
    and it takes honest critique for a poet to develop a dazzle'n style
    something similar to the crowd feedback in that movie 8mile
    this aint a clique thang...this is something worth wild
    and all formats are welcome from haiku to freestyle...

    destee.com embelishes the concept of love and black pride
    how else will we get better if we are afraid to step to the other side
    being comfortable is something...but when the new comes thru...don't hide
    look at what we all have to offer...poetic discussion...come'n forth from inside
    i know we are all driving in style...but it won't hurt to tune up that ride...

    so if you are looking for more bang out the pad and pen
    don't be afraid poets...get a cup of tea or whatever...and come right in
    drop a poem or just critique it doesn't matter...the situation is win/win
    let's get our growth on as a family because family is what really matters in the end...
    question: who will tell you that you have a big booger in your nose?
    answer: only a friend....now let us begin.... :grouphug: :climb: :grouphug:

    come one come all
    let's all get down
    cause poetic discussions
    are in your town...word

    http://destee.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=202
     
  2. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Poem Pimpin!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word !
    surely the move will be heard
    poetic vision wisdom flow
    many will come to the show
    to step up a new notch........
     
  4. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    don't be skurred...let's get our growth on family...word!

    one love
    khasm
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Completely diggin' what you're workin' out of.

    Constructive criticism never hurt anyone, but it made a lot better.

    Nice.
     
  6. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    u know that i know where the idea for this poem came from..lol...great write man ...i feel u ... what really matters in the end...thats so true .....hookup
     
  7. Khasm13

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    I suppose some of them don't wanna have their poetic rides...pimped out, lol
    This was smooth Khasm...
    I will most definitely be stopping by soon.
    I may even drop a little something so it can get ripped up
    only to be rebuilt and running better than it was before...

    Do yo thang poet...
    this was a tyte and the message was right...
    Sage
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Isnt it ironic that this one probably will be passed up anyway :read:
     
  10. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this!
    You keep it real for real!:love:
     
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