Black Poetry : FREAKED

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Does the touch from my hand send chills down your spine
    Does the lick from my tongue make you forget about time
    Does the Look in my eyes tell you what’s on my mind.

    YES, I'M GOING TO FREAK YOU!

    Does the sound in my voice tell you, you don’t have a choice.
    Does the sway in my hips tell you I want you to flip, me upsidedown.
    Does the erectness of my nipples tell you, its just that simple

    YES, I’M GOING TO FREAK YOU!

    Does the wetness of my ocean, tell you, I have the potion.
    To make you cum all night.
    Does this ice in my mouth make u want to shout.
    Baby I’m telling you without a doubt

    YES, I’M GOING TO FREAK YOU!

    Does the rise of my thighs make you feel like your high
    From the scent of my pudding pie

    YES I'M GOING TO FREAK YOU!

    Does my sensuous stare tell you I'M, the one to not dare
    YES, I'M GOING TO FREAK YOU!

    I hope your ready for some nasty fun, cause my body’s hot
    And guess who’s the lucky one.
    Enough of all the hesitation, I’m givin nothing but pure erotic stimulation
    Call your boss and tell him you will need a week
    Because Baby, your about to be
    FREAKED....
     
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    Please hammer, don't hurt'em ...lol
    They say "The freaks come out at night!" ...not true:nono:
    we come out when and where it's needed, I aint' mad at cha...^5
    Nice & steamy drop poet.
     
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    lolol

    Thank you Queen. Girl you know, sometimes you have to bring that FREAK out. lol Thanks again
    Much Luv
     
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    There is nothing wrong with being a freak. Hell, sometimes its more fun when you just have that one person and that freak in you can come out whenever. I applaud you for being all woman about yours. I got one thing to say about this and this is it. Men really just want a woman to be a lady in public places but a freak at all times. I remember I was in Virgina, stationed there through the militray, well anyways I met this young lady who turned me inside out outside in, I ended up marring her. She gave it to me like a cosmic force never leaving me hungry for anything less. Although we are divorced right now we find each other calling each other and still talking about all those things we use to do, the places we did them at, and how much we still adored each other.

    Thanks for bringing me back to that.
     
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    wow imagined my eyes are on bucked gurl.. this was some hot write. my keys are so hot and eyes are burning that visine just want take out the dryness. whew somebody get me a cold one now. whew let me go flo on FONT]:terrific: :terrific:
     
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    Man.. that is it 4EverLuv! Girl you and Nevar don't get to come out of the house after the street lights come on!!! Period! Your mannish grown behinds! Ya'll need to sing some church hymns or something! This poem sounds like the introduction to a Zane short story.. I swear if I find this in the next Sex Chronicales novel both of ya'll are on punishment! Shame on it All! LOL....

    <walking out stomping & slamming the door>
     
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    Mannie... smh... i think i need to add you to the list... i missed that post... lol... smh
     
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    to ifucomesoftly....

    hey sis you aint too far behind her so get in line hon. and besides i like zane. and hope to be right along in the section with her. so um get ready cause her i cum whoops come. you know the words sound alike and not spell alike. hey grammatical error. toddles sis.!!!!!!!:zipit: :zipit: :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    Wow, I see you exorcised the freak out of that special someone. Have that man coming home like a latchkey kid. LOL...do ya thang..QQ
    :peace:
     
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    Defiant:
    Thank you for feeln' my flo. I hear what your saying, and I agree. There is a time and place for everything. It's always good when you got that one somebody that makes you throw caution to the wind and get lost in them. Again, thanks for the luv.

    Nevar:
    Didn't mean to burn ya. :) lol No, for real thank you for checkn' out my flo.

    Softly:
    I so sorry:), Now you want to put people on punishment and you round here talkn' bout Dorain and saying Mmmhhhhhhhhhhh. lol I think your hand needs to be spanked too.:nono: You wanta put me on the no writing after dark list. lol Girl, Zane is one of my favorite writer's, she thinks like I think. So if she wants me in her next Sex Chronicles I'm going to tell I need to bring my co-writer IfUComeSoftly and we'll write some stories so hott you'll need gloves to take the book off the shelf. Thanks so much for feeln' my flo. You are sooo crazy. lol
    Much Luv
     
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