Black Poetry : Frankly Speaking

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Mar 20, 2001.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *closes eyes and whispers*
    This is going to be tough...
    but...when is it ever enough?
    When evidently you seized my heart and soul
    seemingly from the first moment
    I spoke to you.
    What is it I provoke in you?
    Visions of salaciousness
    or dreams of love?
    It’s just so unheard of
    for me to be acting like a silly schoolgirl
    just to receive a note from you
    with colorful lil mental vistas
    of all the things you wish I would let you do.
    Ditties of devotion...
    power packed promises of passionate promiscuity...
    you just don't fathom what it is you do to me...
    how your words are as vital to me as air...
    I need to breathe you in...
    *inhales*
    Far worse is the anticipation of your call.
    I don't comprehend time and space at all
    until I hear your sweet voice reaching out
    to caress me across the void.
    It almost has me paranoid
    to think that I don't remember time before
    I met you.
    It’s almost as if you were always there
    in some oragamic way, shape, or form..
    nameless and shapeless, forever floating so near
    whispering promises of your love in my ear
    while I lay sleeping at night.
    But it’s just not right...
    It’s not enough that you've invaded my space
    and graffitied your name all over my body and face...
    staking a claim in a secret place in my heart
    and handcuffing me to the center post of your soul...
    no...that's not your goal...
    your goal is to totally dominate me
    and make me say
    the words that I've always found so hard to say...
    that...
    if u were to ever go away from me...
    I would surely die.
    *exhales*
    I need for you....to just....love me...
    make me your slave, your lover, your visionary, your weakness, your inspiration...
    I'd move heaven and earth to prove I'm worthy.
    please...love me.
    That would be enough...
    Don't you agree?
    *opens eyes*
     
  2. nubianlover

    nubianlover Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    worthy u r
    ya love is a pure bliss
    of sweet tenderness
    from the land of love
    i walk the rivers pond
    see yo glar in the tingle
    water waves and smile
    flow on!
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    very nice flowww !!!
    this spoke to me ... smiling

    luv it!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes!

    da luv joint--I loved it--very nicely done and with style--perked up my day--Amun-Ra
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...power packed promises of passionate promiscuity"

    StarGoddess, there you go raising the bar again. This was like a spring mist on a 110 degree temped body. Keep doin' what you do...and thank you for the gift of your words.

    blakverb
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    StarGoddess ...
    thank you one more time for this
    and everything

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth drop of love here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spoken frankly and lovingly. This scribe captured that true yearning and need. This was soul deep.
     
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