Black Poetry : " Frame of Mine " ( about women in skirts )

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm not into lingerie, don't even gotta get all dolled up -
    just a sundress - or some overalls, some old jeans -
    but PREFERABLY ........ some type of skirt.

    Ladies,
    some nice legs wrapped in a skirt is powerful force.
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    " Frame of Mind "



    I

    The Admirer admiring a private scene.

    I the impressionable breather of your canvas.



    You frame Shooting Stars and un - broken promises
    in suede pleated cascades of fabric
    flowing,

    falling,

    framing.

    Honey golden, slow roasted highways protected by plaid on each side.

    Quadralateral Frame of my high.

    Exposing just enough thigh to hint the artwork inside.


    The involuntary tease of ecstasy cloaked in mystery.

    Open ended frame of cotton,
    fabric of our magic of our lives.

    Imagining the brush strokes that created your painting's Oil.

    What inspired this piece ?

    Tossing questions at new angles,
    entangled woven walls
    come tumbling down.

    I


    The Admirer Admiring a private scene .


    Your halfway fully clothed expressionary contemporary masterpiece

    ~ A Collector's Item.


    Above fire places, flames reaching to lick

    Until the heat un-ravels this frame of mine





    and you're standing there





    completely naked.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hyp, now this piece is so tyght that i had to just let you know,
    that i prefer to wear some type of skirt that will show my frame,
    put you into hypnotical trances as, i, see you, the impressionable breather of my canvas, glance at me. i'm, lookin' at you, lookin' at me, as i begin to think about that painted private scene.... dear poet, this piece is very nyce and ofcourse, i'm lovin' it! keep on scribin'...i'm watchin'.


    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyp~

    This piece is definitely a "Collector's Item" fo sho'!

    Tight az hell! You are incredibly gifted baby bruh!!
    Reading this piece reminded me of Why I missed you sooooo much.... I love this aggressively smooth painting~


    :heart: ya' Boo ~ keep em' comin'
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hypnotize....


    in my eyes... you can do no wrong! :)

    where da hell you been? i been missin'
    your flow!! this was indeed a classic...

    when i was done... i actually said "Bravo" out loud! :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    OOOH!!! YESSS

    I LOVE WHEN U RETURN WIT SUCH BLESSING
    AND DES HERE BE A CLASSIC VIBE
    WELL I LOVE LOOKING AT DEM LEGZ......:heart: :D
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hypno

    delicious, my bruvah!

    thank ya!

    a
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    undoubtedly a hypnotic classic...

    nfinitely,
    jh.
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UMMM UMMM UMMM...

    Is all I can say, as I sit, " Doe-Like" and Hypnotized by the brilliance of your art.....Indeed a great Piece!
    Jyntl
     
  9. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you !!!!

    Maan Oh Maaan -

    people who know the power of words use them
    w/ a GREAT intensity --


    I must say your compliments brighten my day -
    Mainly because you all took the time to really
    read it and inhale it ---

    I deeply thank you..



    This was a subject that needed to be addressed.


    Maan - I LOVE SEEING women in skirts --

    It took years for someone to convince me that
    women weren't thinking about sex when they wore skirts . - LOL !!


    tennis skirts -- the little plaid skirts -

    the suede skirts that match brown complexions -


    Accidental allure is the sexiest expression of all.
     
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    YEAp!!

    ya right and trust me i love me some
    wo~man in skirts.......ummmmm! hummmm!!!
    got me daydreaming again!!:D
     
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