Black Poetry : Fragment

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kymkymusa, Feb 23, 2005.

  1. kymkymusa

    kymkymusa Member MEMBER

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    **I am new to writing. I only write for myself. I would like anyone who will to help me with my poetry or tell me I need to keep it to myself. Much love all.

    I know you.....
    Your utterance, my ears deeply understand,
    Your essence, my nose recognizes,
    Your semblance, my tongue tastes,
    Your individuality, my eyes realize,
    Your apparition, my hand embrace,
    Our convergence, my mind aches for..
    I know you...missing fragment of me.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee Kymkymusa

    This is a very nice poem. I like the awareness in what you wrote. Share more. Keep flowing.
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is most powerful.

    Never doubt your calling ~
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well if you are new to writing I can't tell it. I love the honesty and emotion in this piece.

    Welcome! welcome! I hope to read more.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee.com
    Make your self at home because you are
    Happy to be reading you.
    looking for more of your work

    Come join us in voice chat as well
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    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet, You have a style. keep writing.
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Kymkymusa
    And welcome to a world we "share" in
    If it's worth keeping to yourself ...it's worth sharing
    the lay out is wonderful, as you brought it together with style
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling the full depth of this one strong flow
    keep droppin it ......................................
     
  9. kymkymusa

    kymkymusa Member MEMBER

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    Thank All of you

    Thank y'all for being so nice. Your responses mean alot to me.
     
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    First I must say sincerely....This was a precious expression. Be it first piece...seasoned poet...or just plain old writer getting things off their chest...the beauty is in that we all, that is writers, readers, and listeners alike are made whole through this "thing of ours"

    ....Welcome Poet/Prophet....I bid you Peace, Power, and Prosperity
     
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