Black Poetry : fragile Tear...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, May 21, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know.........................
    i,m better off alone...
    Someone said to me ..
    "Dont hate man""
    I Dont hate man...
    not even 1..
    i just get sad...
    of how some of them..
    treat Woman...
    If its the other way around?
    i dont like that to.....

    I,m through....
    Yes ....
    i,m trhough....
    I,m through with this sssh..
    have enough of it...
    Letteraly....
    its making me
    sick...
    Brotha?
    Where are my brotha,s?!!!

    Brotha took my hand and replaced it for my
    niece and became a family man..
    Brotha took my hand....
    and that of my best friend.
    Brotha took my hand got scared of something
    that he always wanted to have...
    Brotha took my hand....
    did,nt know who he was....
    landed behind bars..
    me ending up ..
    with scars......

    Story is..
    Brotha let go of my hand..
    all of them....

    Orthers forced me into love..
    harassing,stalking some offred
    a nice hand....
    but in the mean time they where..
    planing this most devilish plan....
    to use me..and F.... me
    whenever they can..
    Yeah ...you hearing me..
    grieve got me...
    deep down unto ..
    my bone....
    so for now
    dont bother me...
    leave me alone...
    for now i,m better of alone...
    and if lonelyness kneels on my floor...
    i,ll tell him the hell to go home....
    go away ..
    leave me alone...
    Step back!
    I,m closing The Door....
    cause for now..
    i,m better of alone...

    There will come a time..
    that i will open the door....
    but it will only be..
    for real..
    love..
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well written piece....i enjoyed it....good job....

    ~lovely~
     
  3. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree....being alone gives way for chance encounters of the real kind :)
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knock... knock...

    Who is it?

    "Real Love"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hellooooooooooooo!
    tyteeeeeeeee flow !!
    love is grand at da top
    don't stop dis here keep da ink flo......
     
  6. ShayShay

    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very well written

    I know exactly how you feel

    Stay Strong Sista
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks beauty,s.

    thanks shay shay.....youre a rainbowgirl...


    liberty
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..Alone..!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    nice flow
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    makes me sad at times too my beloved sista :)
     
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