Black Poetry : frag-ment-ed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 18, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can't get you
    outta my
    head
    and its got me
    feeling
    frag-ment-ed
    although i'm trying
    to concentrate
    all i can think of
    is
    your eyes
    sweet seductive sighs
    how you smile at me
    even
    when i'm not there
    it captivates
    totally
    to be near the
    whisper
    of your aura
    sends my mental stability
    running
    laughing now at
    being captured
    romantically
    right in the center
    of
    delicate fantasy
    happily
    enthralled in sensitive
    layers
    neatly secured
    vision blurred
    in a good way
    and when you can't stay
    i feel
    frail
    sitting in the window
    good puppy
    wagging his tail
    overrun
    emotional
    separation burn
    sending my plight
    upon a prayer
    awaiting your return...
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Derrick,

    Smooth as silk bro!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dawg
    feeling the love flava
    dun

    dss
     
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    My my my, do I KNOW that feeling.
    ...your aura
    sends my mental stability
    running
    laughing now at
    being captured
    romantically
    right in the center
    of
    delicate fantasy
    happily
    enthralled in sensitive
    layers


    Been there, done that. Doing it right now as a matter of fact.
    Beautiful, touching piece Derrick. You captured the feeling pefectly.
     
  5. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes she does it to ya...

    G.Q.,...you know how we like to lay it down

    So'Ja - trying to march along that love thang ya know

    Deepgrrl...well you know ma:toast:

    thanx for the read ya'll

    One
    Derrick Jay
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know this Feelin!!

    Thanks fo bringin it Back Bruh!!:toast:
    Smooth Flo Fo Sho!!
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cool: :rolling:
     
  8. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey Rashad...anytime brotha and thanks

    brotherman...you know how we be laying it down

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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