Black Poetry : Four Seasons

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  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spring….
    As my love opens up,
    Like a new bud.
    Nurtured by your shower of attention,
    Your ray of personality,
    Not to mention your warmth of congeniality.
    Newborn love,
    New to the world,
    New to me.
    Summer….
    Your heat, my heat,
    Our heat.
    Our hot, sizzling, burning,
    Love?
    The very essence of you,
    Brought the color and vibrancy,
    To my black and white world…
    New level of love,
    Seen by the world,
    But new to me.
    Fall…
    Falling…
    Leaf by leaf,
    Layer by layer.
    Grief after grief,
    As I said prayer after prayer,
    For you,
    For us.
    Different array of colors,
    Your colors.
    Gradually, progressively, slowly,
    Revealing…with time.
    New image of you.
    Known by the world,
    But so new to me.
    Winter…
    So cold, so frozen.
    No color or life.
    No warmth.
    So what’s so cold?
    My love for you?
    Or just you?
    New revelation.
    New to me,
    As I watched four seasons change.
    Spring….
    Trusted by the world again.
    Averted by me…
    As I try to divert my eyes,
    From the fragile possibilities
    Until it’s my season,
    And my time to reap.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful four seasonal love
    as it circles in rotation again
    tyte drop lovin the spring summer fall & winter treat
     
  3. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Merci Beaucoup :thanks: Rich as always
     
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    indeed most welcome from da poetic heart !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked the way you delved into each season of love, layer by layer. Beautiful poem sista.
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks much :spin: Glad u felt it
     
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    You've got mad talent, young lady. :terrific:
     
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    the serenity has been brought back to the forum...

    *poetic plaque*
     
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    ahh a Beautiful redition of the seasions! :welldone:
     
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    Seasons change
    feelings remain



    ahhh the bliss
    of seasons change......Beautiful naturistic flow poetess;)
     
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