Quiet Poetry Lounge : Four Seasons

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Nov 24, 2003.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spring….
    As my love opens up,
    Like a new bud.
    Nurtured by your shower of attention,
    Your ray of personality,
    Your warmth of congeniality.
    Newborn love,
    New to the world,
    New to me.
    Summer….
    Your heat, my heat,
    Our heat.
    Our hot, sizzling, burning,
    Love?
    The very essence of you,
    Brought the color and vibrancy,
    To my black and white world…
    New level of love,
    Seen by the world,
    But new to me.
    Fall…
    Falling…
    Leaf by leaf,
    Layer by layer.
    Grief after grief,
    As I said prayer after prayer,
    For you,
    For us.
    Different array of colors,
    Your colors.
    Gradually, progressively, slowly,
    Revealing…with time.
    New image of you.
    Known by the world,
    But so new to me.
    Winter…
    So cold, so frozen.
    No color or life.
    No warmth.
    So what’s frozen solid?
    My love for you?
    Or just you?
    New revelation.
    New to me,
    As I watched four seasons change.
    Spring….
    Trusted by the world again.
    Averted by me…
    Until it’s my season,
    And my time to reap.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee:wave:
    enjoyed your flow..:angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the way you did this-comparing the shades of love with the seasons--very nice.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey, welcome! :wave: Lovin this metaphor and your flow. Lookin forward to seein more!
     
  5. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey thanks....glad u like it......I'm looking forward to sharing more cuz i'm feeling a whole lot more comfortable with the site. :spin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within very smooth flow i love the flava u pose
     
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    wow
    i am loving the mix
    of the season
    in this vision flow
    very nice
    indeed
    Peace
     
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    The message you just sent to all of us was enlightening,but also true
    and keep that up and we'll all keep loving you!!!!
     
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