Black Poetry : Four Doors

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 27, 2006.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have four doors to let you in.
    I'm feeling profound. So come on in.
    Two eyes, two ears, I love your feel.
    It's good to see you, again tonight.
    I'm feeling real good so I took this flight.
    I wanted to come sooner. But timing was'nt right. I picked Friday.
    Saturday would have been better. To spend the night.
    Getting all into you again my love.
    How long has it been since I last saw you?

    I want so badly to make love to you tonight.
    Your friends , my situation. The time isn't right.
    It was like a dream.

    I held your hand. You make me glad I'm a man.
    Your still on my mind. In my head. You told a joke.
    It was funny for sure. I'm still going over our moments.

    You asked me to keep in touch. In a brief moment we both shared so much.
    A touch, a hug. A parting embrace. A kiss on your cheek.
    Near your lips. Carressing your face. Making love to you.
    Even in my mind. Has me throbing, for more of your touch and your time.
    I'm not making this up. It happened last night.
    I do love you and you love me so much.
    I came to watch you perform. You are at your best. The band was great.
    You sang to me while we sat at the bar . It was so sweet.

    A trip a meeting another moment in life. My friend saw it. Your friends felt it.
    I love you girl. I have your number. This is about love and life.

    You asked me to contact you. Sooner or later were going under.
    I will help you schedule this sharing of love. To me from you. From me to you.
    A thought just accured to me in my mind. I do love you. I do need you.
    We are going to have each other in this lifetime. Six years since we first met.

    Has it been that long?

    I have been patient. We both have, makes it so special.
    Your magic.

    You know there is something special about me. You see it. You know it.
    Something special. Something special about you.
    I know part of it is your essence, your sprit I see.
    So as you enter those doors. I give you all four.
    My mind and my heart are hard to capture.
    I surrender. I have been snared.
    Hurry up this way again.
     
  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee... you are on a roll... it's like we're having a conversation... better yet.. talking and then the exchange... lol...

    snaps...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa! bruh u got it banging tyte right here
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a nice piece
    she will love this for real
    very creative
    7.5/10
    uno
     
  5. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved the way you put this down! :welldone:
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee:
    This was so devine. Nice scribe

    Much Luv
     
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