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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poetic_scrolls, Dec 1, 2006.

  1. poetic_scrolls

    poetic_scrolls Member MEMBER

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    one more day found me one more hour,
    wrapped in one more minute.
    where you didn't fill the seconds,
    or the second thoughts of my mind.
    you found a way to be freed,
    and at that moment i saw no reason for your existence.
    see because the times i realized how hard my heart had become,
    i didn't want any part of it--or anyone that had had it.
    so you see,
    one more day found me one more hour.
    where i didn't find the time to write my sorrows down,
    and where i could no longer cry myself to sleep.
    can you dig that,
    i couldn't even cry anymore.
    just sit and draw,
    or whatever came to my mind--but not you.
    no ma'am,
    too many time i let my thoughts wind themselves around you.
    fighting--shoot--durn near dying,
    to get out of your physical aura.
    oh how i tried to drown them out with,
    "Mom's Apple Pie."
    but even it wasn't sweet enough to drown you,
    not even IT!
    and you see one more day found me one more hour,
    where i could do what i do the best.
    nothing,
    nothing at all.........................:thinking:
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic_scrolls:
    Now I really am feeling this scribe.
    You said a mouthful right here.


    one more day found me one more hour,
    wrapped in one more minute.
    where you didn't fill the seconds,
    or the second thoughts of my mind.


    one more day found me one more hour.
    where i didn't find the time to write my sorrows down,
    and where i could no longer cry myself to sleep.


    Very very nice write.:great:

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed not a thing at all
    this hit da spot and point made
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the flo of the words flo on Poet!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When those emotions get so that you can't "even cry any more", then you have dug yourself a chasm, and it's so hard to climb back out. I was feeling this poet.
     
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    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A good many of us has been there. That was a thought provoking and great poem! Thank you! Be Blessed!
     
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