Black Poetry : Foul Game

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Foul game….

    Pure as the water flow
    Deep as the ocean…..
    I can see the game as you
    Act untamed but dayum
    Who is to really blame?
    All I know its all a shame
    You wanna lay claim
    But what the hell you proclaim
    All your doing is running a scam
    At this point not on me but
    On your self
    My third eye have evolve
    My wisdom have took hold
    And all I see is a foul game
    You can’t stay true to yourself
    Let alone me….
    I aint made atch ya
    Wondering like a lost soul
    Pretendin when it’s really nothing
    Putin things in perspective…
    I see bull….
    You doing you is all fine
    But respect me
    Respect my feelings....
    Dayum respect me
    And that you can’t seem to get right
    And I am tired of all this ish
    See thas a foul game
    Using the I love you
    To hold on….
    But its all false…
    The on going bull….
    The disrespect
    The nasty taste it leaves in my mind
    And you have no clue
    Get your head up out the blue
    And look what’s happening
    Before it’s to late
    At times I wonder if I should walk
    Without a word…
    But seems I just stick around
    Taking the pain
    Giving myself hurt
    But the groundwork is from you
    Are you really blind?
    That you let this foul game continue
    Hell do you even care to take notice?
    See I am tired of this foul game
    Feeling your vibe
    But I aint up for another round…
    So get real come real
    Handle all this ish
    Or move on over….
    See I got the essence
    Profound in my love
    Strong in my stride
    Holding my head in pride
    And I aint made atcha
    But baby you on an EGO trip
    And you’re about to lose….

    (C) 2004
    unknown files
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *Whew*...SistaGirl...
    You flowed this with
    every...fiber of passion
    in your poetic finger...
    This piece...roared
    like "Redman would say"
    The dungeon dragon...

    Flow on girl...
    The flames will be burning
    on this thread for a long
    time to come...

    Sage
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I can dig it,
    Great drop!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa!!
    dis one was wow!!!
    the depth , realms , heart and strong hold
    whewww sista u took this there and back
     
  5. PurpleMoons

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    Dang! Sister this was tyte!

    This is my part right here!


    :darts: flow it like you know it sis!
    Tyte piece!
     
  6. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa Mz Angel
    You came strong with this one.







    I heard that, I felt that!!! :coffee:
     
  7. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Foul game?
    y should love b a game?
    y should we learn how to play?
    y cant we mean wat we say?
    y cant they c that we feel?
    why cant we b real?
    feelin this drop 2 tha fullest
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have to agree with those before me. You laid it down plain for all to see.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage...thanks sis for the love....wheeew i tell ya :lol:
    happy you enjoyed the flow b/c i really
    didnt know how it was gone turn out thanks....:)

    THEONE..thanks happy you likes

    $$RICH$$...lol thank you baby happy you enjoyed my flow
    it was off the top guess i done well...:)

    PurpleMoons...thanks si i thought it added strenght too
    but until you said something i didnt know for sure
    happy you enjoyed the flow....:)

    Pharaoh Jahil hey my brother..thank you for the love.....happy you likes...:)

    hisili...i guess some never will be true to themselves so how can they begin to be true to another....thanks for the read happy you likes the vibe..:)

    watzinaname..thanks for the support on the flow...


    wheeew...thank you all again..this was off the top of my head..but i guess it was good b/c i have my familes loving support....:grouphug:

    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you, sis. You reach a point where you're no longer willing to put up with it anymore. Nice drop. :dance3:
     
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