Black Poetry : fortune tell(HER)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, May 11, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she built me a
    santuary of solace
    for my 30th born day

    she left me on my 31st
    and I wondered
    was premonition
    her hidden gift instead
    of loving me.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece

    says so many things to me
    I can hardly articulate
    anything more
    than to say
    wwwwooowwww!

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  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2, queen. thank you. per Usual.

    one love,blak
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    ...kinda makes you wonder (doesn't it)...

    if people somehow (subconsciously) prepare us for their departure.

    thanks for sharing Love.

    Peace.
    Sunshyne~
     
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