Black Poetry : Forgiven

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by conflict, Dec 7, 2007.

  1. conflict

    conflict Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Endangered Species here comes the Grim Reaper
    Time ticking from the clock of the Time Keeper
    Its about to reach Zero
    Where are the Black Heroes
    Who's gonna save me from the man in the Mirror
    G dot O dot D be my SAVIOR
    From Negativity my own Destructive Behavior
    I Confessed my Transgressions
    YOU showered me with Blessings
    I tried to walk in YOUR SONS shoes the best that I could
    But I didn't learn my lesson
    I went and got arrested
    My face was the face under the Reapers hood
    And Time after Time YOU Forgave me for my sins
    So I'm sure GOD IS LOVE cause I'm Forgiven again
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise as i too been forgiven ....great piece
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey conflict
    Your beat is awesome. Your message on point.
    Its hard not to vibe off the drop.
    You are giving US a Very deep and honest example in
    regards to 2nd chances
    I felt it straight up... Forgiveness is an
    optimist gift.And you have shown US just how precious
    It is indeed... Much Love

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked this piece. Besides the great tempo of your lines, we have all been forgiven umpteen times, but we forget just how often. Welcome back!
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    conflict:
    What profound words
    with so much truth
    Thank God for foregiveness
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been waiting for you call
    I've been Waiting so long
    Then I realized it was Mine
    The we both had been waiting for all of this time
    Now I see Time
    As it once passed me By
    I see like Trees
    Now Im way way High
    I will never see
    How you see me
    But I know If I can catch a Hint
    Blessed I will be


    Straight Love Brotha
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Forgive us our trustpassers as we forgive those who trustpass against us.
    Nice piece poet.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes hear and feel you poet

    trying to sane around this negativity is extremely difficult

    but somehow the divine peace always finds its' way if one is open to it

    and learning from past mistakes or watching other peoples mistakes doesn't hurt either


    feeling you
     
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