Black Haiku : forgiven but not forgotten

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your forgiven deeds
    Equate to understanding
    But I can't forget

    You won't stab twice
    I now comprehend your more
    So I watch you more

    Never forgetting
    For Twice bitten my shame
    but no love is lost
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man

    i'm definitely not mad at you

    hold fort the way you KNOW HOW

    don't be fooled


    AGAIN!

    peace

    :happens:
     
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    Forgiveness the remnance of love
    Given to you so easily
    You throw it away freely

    watchin you
    And You notice
    I wonder why
    You did it again


    My love for you
    Now I question
    How much longer
    Will I pretend
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad I had an opportunity to lay my eyes on this...
    Very Nice with stated purpose!
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    definitely not
    Forgotten?....I dont think so
    deep is the ocean.

    Forgiven?...maybe
    tree roots are ever long
    I'm working on it.




    PS: below I quote you

    your forgiven deeds
    Equate to understanding
    But I can't forget

    I love it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I forgiven thee
    but my heart also know now
    how can i forget

    your double edges word
    slice'd but not twice i see u
    by the far way look

    I forgave all that
    was placed against me by your
    hand to not forget
     
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