Black Poetry : Forgive me but.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Forgive me but I am scared
    The way your soul invades mine
    And calls my love
    The voice echoes through my heart
    Touching my inner woman
    Making her come alive
    Forgive me baby
    The dreams I have
    Of you and me
    In holy matrimony
    This I wish upon a star
    And by far
    You became my King
    My lover of choice
    Forgive me but I am scared
    As I look within
    I know I can love
    Just want it to last
    This time
    Been hurt time and time again
    And the pieces are harder each time
    To mend……
    Can it really be real
    Will the sun finally shine
    On my side of love
    Because it hurts as a sweet ache
    As I allow love to flow through
    Forgive me but I am scared
    My soul cries
    But the love is so good
    For it was raining
    And lost hope
    The clouds had formed
    And I was all-alone
    As my tears ran
    For you came in and took my hand
    And opened up a whole new me
    But
    Baby I am scared
    Forgive me....

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  2. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece angel. i can definitely relate, falling in love again can be scary after dealing with all the previous bs
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speaks for itself ......tyte drop from da emotional mental state
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for the love
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya here on this one.....and I can relate...knowing that this person loves you but you still having scars from past hurts....Nice drop :spin:
     
  6. Bluewater

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    my sisters
    this is flow is so moving
    very nice drop sis
    wonderful poem

    Blue:heart:
     
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    :look: i never know who you would be talkin bout
    or is this ya dream men
    and all ya stalkers are jes attemptin to be him
    :lol:
    hehehe
    had to say it hehehe
    let the love live and liberty be in love :)
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424...gurl i aint even goin there ya know...:lol:
    thanks for the love

    Blue...thanks sis for the love happy you enjoyed the flow

    Chastity..thank you for letting me know ya feel the vibe happy you likes

    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    like the flow...and enjoy the "scare" cause it's real emotions...
     
  10. MrFolklore

    MrFolklore Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm really skurred of you

    Good piece. Emotion packed. The matrimony part had the hairs on the back of my neck going woo, woo, woo.
     
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