Black Poetry : Forgive I am Trying

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I for give you
    Even if it is not what I want to to
    but it is the correct things to do
    because i am more and better then that
    as I inhale a release of that common fact
    and exhale the negative vibe that was holding me back

    it is true that there is a child like mental thing with you
    as you walk in my shawdow..and mime my moves
    but that is the darkness of you

    so i need to stop holding back
    my investigation is done
    and i am going to have
    some old fashison fun

    because it has come to me
    that i am velveta
    not imatation cheese
    and that there is so much more of me
    as i smile feeling a nice vibe
    so wonderful to release
    a negative hold
    so bold to feel it
    as i flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' how i feel u Blue
    i too was in da dip
    until i felt a beautiful
    trip of vibe to my mind
    as release the darkness
    to light now i feel
    alright dis here be tyte
    and out of sight
    flow on scribe , vibe
    let it roll from deep inside
    have some fun under da sun
    let it flow the way u know
    let's go !!!!
     
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    kick back
    and let da vibe roll
    like rollerskates
    on a sunny stroll...
    i liked this joint blue
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kicking It

    thank you brother Rich for feeling on this...as i do now release that dark side...cause i got stuff i am ready to pop with in a cool bliss:laugh: thank you for your love and support it do mean a lot to me

    thank you brother Khasm..yes i am kicking it ..oiling my skates and rolling along...thank you so much for the love..as i take that sunny stroll so much of me will unfold:heart:
     
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    tricky, ain't it
    standin between letting go
    for your own self-preservation
    and not forgetting
    so that ish doesn't happen again
    personally, I decided to do both:
    I let the cancerous feelings go
    but I am not forgiving, cause
    like trust, forgiveness is a gift
    someone gives you
    and she ain't gettin it

    peace, sister Blue. enjoyed your flow
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am laughing cause i love you my dear sister:) as you tell it straight up ...that is a fact..it sure is tricky..but it was keeping me bitter..and stopping me from being me...as you just said i had to release that canceruos feeling...but i am not forgetting the fact....and so i will indeed be watching my back..thank you sister..you are wonderful :heart:
     
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    I'm glad you are able to release the bitterness from your life because in the end it will just bring decay to your everyday life. Let it go is the key and if the intended person can't see that, it is their loss.
     
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    to forgive is to release the bitterness
    guess one day i will as you did
    lovely flow enjoyed it....Angel
     
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    Beautiful Scribe!

    This was well done and had some very good points that we all need to pay attention to
    that is what I love about just taking time to go down the list and read, no matter what I am
    going through, someone else is going through it too. Or they say something profound to just
    turn it all around...THANK YOU!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    AWW! I most assuredly love you, sister. Thanks for the reply. Many blessings and much love to you.
     
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