Black Poetry : Forget me not (in three parts)

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  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    1st interpretation
    They began,
    as last glances to soft gentile kisses.
    smiles, that turned into regretful good byes
    to trips taken in the middle of the night
    cross town
    - half sleep, listening to Jay-Z and Dewlle tunes
    tellin myself that ,
    Tonight is the last time would I leave you
    at four in the morning,
    blurred visions of graphitti painted angels
    hypnotize eyes to focus on white lines
    as they converge
    I swerve “****”
    better get my mind right CRASH!

    2nd movement
    You remember that kid?
    Caesar, that DJ that New Years Eve Party
    was packed back in ‘98 Yo’ that boy was sick
    Blazin’, mixin’ beats with weed
    and we really danced like Kings
    no one was yawning - four in the morning
    off to breakfast
    it was amazin’
    the stages that brother climbed through.
    remember that, you couldn’t have forgotten that
    There ain’t never going to be another.

    3rd time is real
    Forget me nots
    were not of her saying good byes
    but the look of her daughters face
    as she slept
    how she’d laugh at me silly stunts
    or the last time I, You , we were together
    that summer, that winter
    that day we both wanted to last until peace came not
    some things will remain a part of me
    ____________________________
    A Copy write of All things possible
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe of flow
    drop it like u know
    keep flowin'
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is unique and tyte...i like...
     
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    breaking it parts
    very nice indeed
    nice flow
    Peace
     
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    nice read...
     
  6. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the support


    three ways to remember one way to live. -
    for life, for love, for you.
     
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    Wow.....this reached very deeply...
    I could have read more...but I will
    settle for more postings...please!

    This was incredible!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful...much love to you
     
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    flow on poet :)
     
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    Beautiful......I loved it.
     
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