Black Poetry : Forget cause you are Forgotten

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  1. Loveall20

    Loveall20 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are worthless,
    it's bitter taste is foul.
    Sickly I am, knowing the lies
    lurked behind each of your smiles.
    Elegantly dressed your deceptiveness,
    finest top notch suit of untruthfulness.
    Trust, a word you not dare utter,
    disgrace me you used it without a single sutter.
    Spineless snake, slither about with you twisted ways,
    I hate you, you lied dead to my face.
    Looked dead in my eyes and lied, lied, lied.
    And when the truth came to me,
    stoled my pride.
    Because I sat there,
    and cried, cried, cried.
    My tears still falling
    As my wrath grew,
    and all my rage directed towards you.
    I hate you, the echo ricocheting off all walls,
    Gained my trust, then shattered and torched it all.
    Forget you ever knew me,
    that there ever was a we,
    Erase me from your consciousness,
    access will be denied to thee.
    Forget I ever loved you,
    my love,
    you ever owned.
    Forget cause you are forgotten,
    now that is truth something I heed you to learn.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tell it all
    dis here speaks out
    tyte flow of reality
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell it like it is!!!! Lovin this!

    "Forget I ever loved you,
    my love,
    you ever owned.
    Forget cause you are forgotten"

    DEEP
     
  4. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can relate sis. Nice flow
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was powerfully poetic.
    Lovin da flow.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa! Took me for a ride. I like this.
     
  7. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl you gave me chills, are so so very talented.

    WELCOME HOME POET!
     
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