Black Poetry : ~~~FOREVER~~~

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is you I dream of in the quiet peace of my slumber

    No wonder I sleep with a smile on my face….

    Thoughts of you bring me joy

    Whispers of melodies of uncharted rapture and ecstasy in my ear

    As I smell the scent of your intoxicating aroma

    I proceed to become fervently drunk off you

    Feeling the strongness of your body next to mine

    Im ready to board your passion plane

    And travel to that place that knows no pain

    Eating chocolate dipped strawberries

    While drinking bubbly Champaign

    Experiencing the pleasures that only your love can bring

    And I don’t want to live without

    My body is on fiyah requesting you to put the flame out

    I lay my head upon your chest

    As we lay chest to breast unable to verbally express

    This euphoriant feeling of blissfulness

    Our eyes say the words that our lips could not attest

    The coupling of we could not have been more beauteous

    Embarking on a glorious tomorrow

    Where yesterdays sorrows are just that…

    Yesterdays sorrows

    Here and now is the beginning our journey

    To a place called

    ~~~FOREVER~~~​
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea that's what i'm talking

    feeling the love poet

    i work to do this so i can feel what your saying 4EL

    peace poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Surely it's on da horizon for this in depth has took me under ya wings wow
    this was awesome and i could just lay into this like a deep rush of passion
    set to put out ya fire....U go gurl !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Laying next to that special someone, in mutual bliss and contentment. Some things are difficult to aptly express, yet your pen flowed oh so well. Awesome.
     
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    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooh wee, I'm feeling.....this. I think I intentionally fall in love, over and over again, and make love, over and over again, and live in love constantly everyday cause it feels sooo good. And this write,makes me wanna do it, all over again. Thanks, Love on Poet! Love On!