Black Poetry : Forever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, Apr 20, 2006.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Infatuation at the start,
    The mighty question raced through my heart.
    "Is it love?" I can't decide.
    That's the question I would ride...
    Through the streets of ups and down,
    When would I walk on stable ground?
    Down the street I see a light,
    Now I'm thinking this ain't right.
    I decide to follow it,
    Then I fall into a pit...
    Filled with emotions over my head,
    Better think fast or I'll be dead.
    I find a rope to get me out,
    Now I know without a doubt.
    I run to you with lightning speed,
    Knowing now it's you I need,
    That you are my soul mate.
    You and me hand in hand is fate,
    There isn't anything I wouldn't do.
    To prove my love to you is true,
    I would die to be with you...

    Forever


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  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was luvin dat emotional piece rite derr
    dis is how i felt and still feel but i dont kno if its luv
    dis was truly beautiful 2 me
    so flo on wit luv


    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a forever yearning burn lingers
    this was tyte
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You captured the emotions so well, I was feeling the flo.
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh i love the passion that was felt in this. love it poet see thats' the kind of love i want right here.:welldone:
     
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