Black Poetry : forever

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  1. Vybe-etry

    Vybe-etry Member MEMBER

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    it was our first public engagement
    our first conversation
    our first special occasion
    that changed our single situation
    into a commited relation...
    ship
    sometimes i trip
    off that soft first kiss with hesitation
    off the first time we made love... no expectations
    that first love deication
    to say you were thinking of me
    thinking if we
    could go on an eternal vacation
    to a destination
    only love could take us
    only love would make us
    who we want to be and who we really are
    no matter where i wanted to go it could never be too far
    so lets make it last forever
    for worst or for better
    whether poor or whether rich
    you'd never be my n!gg@
    and i'd never be your [email protected]
    but you'd be my moon... my husband
    i'd be your sun... your wife at hand
    for as long as we live on god's sand

    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    welcome to the house of poetic respect as you get ya feet wet
    nice vibe u scribe tyte and smooth feel ya poetry groove
    welcome from above as i bless this some love .................. :hearts2:

    we try not to use the B word or the N word here it's on our banned list
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    again welcome to the love land of poetry at destee.com enjoy :coffee:
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  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creative experssion fellow poet.

    Welcome to our house that is now your house also I hope 2 see more from you and I hope you will spread the love to the other poets as well. :welldone:
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    love your sense of the "we"
    and respect for the "we"
    two as one..
    may it always be...that we..
    very nice flow......
    look forward to more...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed the rhythm, rhyme, and message of your flow. Welcome to Destee!!!! Hope to read more from you.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...this peace speaks to places i've been
    first kiss
    first embrace
    first confession
    first expression
    first ring
    first song
    first and only...i do...

    beautiful poet...

    one.
     
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