Black Poetry : forever make you...

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the softness of your love
    moves like the parting clouds
    and breaks of gold and blue
    that banish the tempestuous
    furrows of my brows
    and I can see you now
    the soft kiss of a warm horizon
    where I would place my restless lips
    like hopes of eternal bliss
    even my hands upon your hips
    that slowly wind around your waste
    forever and a day just to taste
    the sweetness of your love
    you the distant sillouhette
    lain on the cusp of creation
    always too far from me
    even as the remnants of rain
    echo from the limbs and leaves
    of trees my heart would
    study each rise and fall of
    each hill and crevice of you
    on the horizon of my desire
    you as love and the lulling
    quiescence of my yearning soul
    and I would forever make you mine


    04/02/03/Michael
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SIMPLY......



    beautiful.....or as my two year old sister would say.....tats prellly!!!
     
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    Lovin your scribe.
    You put it down beautifully.

    "forever and a day just to taste
    the sweetness of your love
    you the distant sillouhette
    lain on the cusp of creation
    always too far from me"

    Great poem.

    *Emma*
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OUI CINDY!
    lol you copied my quote :) we musta been postin at the same time.
    :D

    *Emma*
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx family. Much love and respect to ya!
     
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    Truly beautifully written, Skrybe7

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx, epiphany.
    Much love to ya!
     
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