Black Poetry : forever Kai...

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    forever is not a long time
    especially when in love for
    forever comes so quickly when
    you never want love to end;

    i've never thought of forever
    when it pertains to us for
    time has no place in my life
    whne i think of loving you;

    i used to wish for forever
    it seemed so proper to do
    but i know that forever is
    limiting my time with you;

    today i rest on tomorrows
    for no matter what today may
    bring i know that tomorrow
    will secure my hopes of you;

    my life here on earth is short
    a twinkle in my father's eye
    which is why i want to hold your
    hand until GOD's eyes are closed;

    I can't imagine tomorrow alone
    when a life in me no longer exist
    but i dream of GOD's blessings for
    in HIS presence i await you;

    i await the day when i can look
    into your eyes to see the love
    within for then you will see it
    would be i who shed the most tears;

    i wish a mile was a step for then you
    would only be a long walk away and i
    wish circumstance was happenstance for
    then i could, by chance, cross your path;

    My untouched emotions in unreached
    places have a visitor entering so
    stealth to plant her seeds of peace
    and joy in fertile soil;

    I walked a lifetime alone gathering
    love, trust, comittment and today i
    take 1 chance to find 4-ever in 3 words
    i send to you: 1...4...3...
     
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    this is

    sheer beauty, Poet...

    You have a way of articulating what my heart speaks in silence ~ and I quote

    "i used to wish for forever
    it seemed so proper to do
    but i know that forever is
    limiting my time with you;"

    that's so real in my life...

    thank you D.

    A
     
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    I know you know the flood gates are WIDE open right now..right?
    Each tear i shed is a testimony to the desire and longing to be with you each day, every day. I think about these days to come and i await patiently knowing that they will bring so much happiness for us.

    This is such a beautiful poem, I cant thank you enough...

    me...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    REAL TRUE LOVE IS UNFORGETABLE
    A LOVE U WONT LET END YET IT MUST SLEEP
    BEAUTIFUL PIECE
     
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    dnommo

    passionate flow!
    Great poem!
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    my friend, i thank you for i realized today that when you seek to spend the rest of your life with someone, forever doesn't seem taht long

    8th,
    i always have an embrace to capture your tears....


    $$RICH$$

    thanks bro for the read. i knew you could feel me on this one...

    love reciprocated
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cinnnamon thansk for the read
     
  8. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah....Excuse me....

    Seeing that I am Love's Favorite Son, do I need to perform a ceremony here????
     
  9. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    might just hafta call on you bishop...gotcha in my rolodex
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop,

    i definitely need you for that ceremony now son...
     
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