Black Poetry : FOREVER & HOLD

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Feb 21, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ur my forever
    my love to hold
    together our
    hearts mold

    Ur my dream
    the nightly scream
    my day that light
    my soul in gleam

    forever & hold
    just us two as
    vent into a rapture
    crossing cosmos
    kissing starz
    feeling comfort
    from afar hearts

    Ur my bliss of love
    me , just one above
    u became my delight
    as i keep the mood
    in sight to make u feel
    alright let us continue
    deep in this journey
    off this burning , yearning
    maze ya beauty set of
    a chocolate glaze to amaze

    so beloveth ur my everything
    it's u that make my heart sing
    it's u that take me high
    keep my heart of love as i fly
    i take ya memories wit me
    and forever hold, see belove
    ur my sweet honey pot of Gold :kiss1:
     
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    and within her heart she holds you near...never to far this was sweet and i know she is honored who wouldnt be...flow on this was made from love
    Angel
     
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    Serenely beautiful, like a soft feather floating slowly through the breeze. Flow on with this brotha...
     
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    Aw, man this is sweet! And so very tight on the flow. Lovin it, $$RICH$$ness.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Rich...

    Nice drop, bruh. You took it easy on her this time, huh? :lol:

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts of her with the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very beautiful piece, Rich. Very very deep. Really loved and enjoyed reading your piece. Much love. :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel when love strikes it holds tightly in a mold

    thankz watz when hearts meet they float sweetly together as one beat

    thankz gempis nothing like a forever & hold love of a soul

    thankz Eisha happy you enjoy my vision and warmth i too love your poetic flava

    Hey Moneyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy thankz man yeah i took it easy this time but look out
    for the morning wake up of love .
     
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    ...this was full of the natural sweetness
    that "Honey" natually possesses...

    Love the way it flowed slow...
    as if it were actually falling from
    a honeycomb...

    Nice work poet!
     
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    thankz Sage inside the bubble is a foreverness love
     
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