Black Poetry : Forever and Never

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lpoet, Mar 25, 2002.

  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Carmel skin light brown eyes
    A body from heaven one of Gods
    angels in disguise don’t even need
    To see you because your body perfectly
    Sculpted in my mind face so beautiful
    Cant even describe between these
    Thin blue lines so many see you and lust
    For what’s between your thighs but its
    So much more than that to me cause
    I’ve fallen in love with your mind and
    In my times of depression I release my
    Aggression by letting you know how I feel
    And for some reason some way some how
    When you say everything will be ok
    I believe you and calm down and as of
    Now we do engage in the sinful act of
    Pre-marital sex and I’ve implanted
    you with my seed and aborted my own
    Son or daughter to be because of my own
    Selfish greed and I used to think that
    You and I Were ment to be but
    now I know that You and I are forever
    and never is us
    Not together
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, is dat a true story? Got me feeling the emotion of it.
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love your flow lonely poet. Really moving piece, great imagery.
    Nice work.
    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis took me beyond da facts to a faith of fate......nicely scribe
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the reply rich and to answer you brotherman yes this is a true story bout me and my girl. we been through so much the 3 yrs we been together. and thank u Euphoria for the reply
     
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    this is a deep introspective look at you and your lady's devotion to one another.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LP.


    ahhhh... i love the complete honesty expressed in
    this flow. thanks for sharin' your soul, my dear!

    :heart:itsallLove.
    Elayne
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmmmmm...

    Tyte scribe here poet!
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the replys everyone
    just doing what i know best
     
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    i love it when you tell me you got new stuff. i dont ever waste anytime comeing over here to tell you what i think. and like always i'm loving this. i swear i've fallen in love with you through your poetry. if i could only write like this.
     
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