Black Poetry : Foreclosure

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    On da :fyi:


    I foreclosed you today
    thinking i was a loan
    invading my estate
    when you was bankrupt
    crossing my properties
    with no true love and honor
    toying with emotions and loyality

    I foreclosed you today
    on all i invested
    due to the lack of honesty
    and the poor advertisement
    of true cares
    how you treated each block
    every promisary note

    I foreclosed you today
    wit a stamp of done deal
    you lost ya home as owner
    while all alone you was da loaner
    never could i felt any wronger
    but through it all i've gotten stronger
    placing u in bankruptcy foreclosure

    I foreclosed you today
    due to my properties
    my love ,my time
    my heart ,my mind
    days i spent making u mines
    my body & soul
    the caressin and night holds
    da huggin n' kissin
    foreclosing you is all dat's missin

    It's by da order of my laws
    to foreclose you today
    cause no respect you display
    yo passion was like a nickle & dime
    this kinda thing should be a crime
    closing on all your lying
    deep in my heart today i'm surely dyin
    no more you now in foreclosure.:court:
     
  2. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Doing the final paper work now, on a foreclosure situation...destroying property on promises never intending to repair or pay for. I love this piece!
     
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    Proverbs31Woman Be kinder than necessary! MEMBER

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    Wow Rich, on point description!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Yes Roxanne sometime no matter how strong the feelings is you have to foreclose
    the matter and rebuild and re-invest in a new owner of lovin. Thank u 4 the visit sis.
     
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    Proverbs31woman I had to break it down so they know and understand this closure
    thankz sis for the continue love and read .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    foreclosed yes indeed! love it!
     
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    yes out wit da old in wit the new
    foreclosed to reopen to what's new to two
    thank u my sweetie
     
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