Black Poetry : Forecast

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  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You look outside and say
    oh! its going to storm today
    so you trip into the living room
    to turn the tv on.

    You turn to the News channel
    to watch a little way
    till finally the weatherman came on
    and had alot to say

    " thunderstorm warnning for all about,
    take care it might also flood. Lightening ratio is at an alltime
    high
    so be careful and stay in side."

    5minutes later came back on
    with a strange look on his face
    ' i think we have a new report,
    the first on was in error
    for get what you just heard
    and listen closely to this one"

    God looking down on us
    is saddened by our character
    the evil things we do , evidence of our soul factor
    malignant minded men
    promiscuous women
    babies having babies
    and little boys in the Pen.

    His voices whispers to us
    to change our ways
    but we just hear the thunder rumble
    his heart is breaking at our plight
    but just see the lightning flash.

    Our stink has reached the heaven
    and God can bear no more
    his heart has become overwhelmed
    soul gone sore.
    Us in our blindness failed to see
    the tears he is crying relentlessly
    and in our stupor and in our shame say
    'Oh! it started to rain.'
     
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    da tears which he cry is da droplets of rain
    the sin on earth has him pouring down
    I love dis here ...........thankz
     
  3. elayne.

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    flava.


    point taken!! & i'm feelin' you.

    thank you for bringin' the message! :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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