Black Poetry : fore play

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sha'iyn, Aug 27, 2007.

  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eye Wheel Place Mi Lips N All Uv Dee Write Spots
    Jus Two Git U Hott
    Eye Wood Bee Blessed Two Curess Neck, Thies N Breast
    All B4 Wee Undress
    Unless U Want Mi 2 Take Mi Thyme
    Hunchin' Gruntin' Bump N Grine
    Eye Lick Eye Blo To Kool U Doun
    N Den Beegin 2 Lif Ur Gown
    Tasting Evry Sweet Spot Like ButterSkotch
    Just Two Git U Hott
    Gentlee Skwease Doze Tows
    Rubb On Ur Pheet Reel Slo
    Tugg On Ur Cheeks Lyke Sow
    Tern Ur Lites Doun Lo
    Relacks N Lett Gow
    Lett Mee No Iffen Eye Git 2 Ruff
    Bi Mowning Nah-Ah Wen Eye Tuch
    Dis Luv Laingwij Iz Eazy 2 Lurn
    Lyke Driveeng A Stik Shiff On A Charp Tern
    No Payne Jus Pleazure Steel Mite Yel
    I Kan Reed Ur Bodie Butt, I Kan't Spel
    A Lik​
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hahahahaha

    very good and very original man

    i'm not mad at you playa

    we are only human

    and we got to get some sometimes lol

    feeling the mac layer aka the plumber layer of pipes
     
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    Whether u can't spel a lik, or spell like Webster's, this was playfully aflame.
     
  4. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my gurl out of town, too
    i get real hot and bothered
    and she knows how i like to do me
    so, that was just an outlet write


    "...How he stay faithful in a room full o' hoes?
    Must be the Pharoahs he in tune wit' his soul
    ."
    -Kanye West
    Can't Tell Me Nothin'
     
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    Great piece poet, I like the art in this, it made me smile ...^5
     
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    Lol- This was Super playful-I enjoyed reading this!
     
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    Sha'iyn.....Sha'iyn.....Sha'iyn:
    Doin' his doggone thang.
    Your creativity is amazing!!!!!


    P.S. I hope she's back so you
    can take care of that:)


    Much Luv
     
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    Whew...

    Wow...this was good, I actually blushed a little:blush: ...I admit it took me a second to get right with the way everything was spelled, but after that I was truly delighted...great piece I have a question is this your normal type of flow or was this a spur of the moment type?
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    P.S. I hope she's back so you
    can take care of that:)

    Much Luv [/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][/I][/QUOTE]

    It's only right that she come and take care of her man. I'm trying the loyal thing and man! ...it's okay i guess. how are you doing, beautiful?
     
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    is this your normal type of flow or was this a spur of the moment type?[/QUOTE]

    this was definitely spur of the moment but, i have a stash of passionate pieces some for my exes and others for my fantasies. if you are interested in reading a few pieces, i will post them for you. afro princess. i have a particular write called nubian princess that i am making into a song, like to hear it, here it go...
     
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