Black Poetry : Forbiddin Fruit

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  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want what I can't and shouldn't have.
    My eyes looks ahead in the forbidden light that is you.
    You, who is the forbidden fruit.
    It's you who lours me in
    with your sweet and juicy promises
    whispering in my ear.
    My mind says no but my body says yes.
    It screams yes for that forbidden touch.
    It screams yes for that forbidden yet familiar kiss.
    So ripe and lushes that forbidden fruit.
    I tell myself it is wrong.
    It's wrong to desire that forbidden fruit.
    A fruit so great my tongue can still remember the flavor.
    You capture me in your forbidden eyes,
    reading me like an open book.
    I try to resist your power and your everlasting ecstasy,
    but my weakness for you,
    you who is the forbidden fruit is too great
    and I devour you,
    you who is the forbidden fruit.
    It tastes like life itself
    and your juices flow through my veins.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know how this is. I have expierenced.
    Shoot I still do. Nice flow. I love it.
    FLow on !!!
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Sister.....
    You have Passion Girl
    It was all up in here...
    How Could I not respond!
    LOL
    Sweet Poem....
    Rock On...:10200:
    ~PeaceandLove~
     
  5. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for your comments I truely appreciate your imput.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    devine and felt let ya pen continue to drip da passion
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee.. I like this

    I like the flow, passion and message.

    I with someone elses love
    Make it my own
    I know it is wrong
    Yet I can't resist the moments
    The kiss
    Of the touch
    and the time I miss.

    I want what I can't and shouldn't have!
     
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    HI FattnBeautiful
    smiling and scearming to...lol
    That fruit is so delightful
    yet we have to fight the desire
    and stick to the diet..:chef:
    maybe once and a while
    might just take a bite..
    like me stop..lol
    We know
    how sweet the juice can be..wow!
    nice one sis
    keep it flowing

    Peace~N~Love
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love all the forbidden fruits of this work and Uh Oh Yes I do detect a lil R-Kelly hence the saying "My mind says no but my body says yes!" I ain't mad at ya for that throwback. I think your piece is very juicy and I know Adam would probably have traded his forbidden fruit in for some of this riper one. Keep dropping hot lines and ripe flows through your veins!
     
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