Black Poetry : Forbidden Fruit

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    am i that forbidden fruit?
    that secretly grew from inside of you
    never ceasing the quantity
    but forever seeking full truth
    wondering if you even agree
    to your lies and undermining sleuth
    maybe you would somewhat agree
    that things unplanned are of no use
    look in my eyes and tell me what you find
    deep inside the lines grief
    touch me tenderly in my mind
    through the heavy blankets of conceit
    i know i'm that forbidden fruit
    you still desire but can't take
    i'm in love with a new recruit
    nothing can change the decision i make
    all this time you kept it in
    the threatening secret of your love
    when i begged to be let in
    i was shunned like a slave unloved
    now am i that taintalizing fruit?
    that teases you knowingly
    what goes on now is of no use
    because i'm deep, inside of love you see
    people say i am so wrong
    for knowingly treating you this way
    they must know the agony of my songs
    that i wrote as i was led astray
    all the pity is towards you
    i have happiness exceedingly
    all the pity is just for you
    because i have a peace that beams through me
     
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    tyte a$% poem, i really enjoyed it. much love :)
     
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    ****...your letting that cat have it huh?
    that's the way of the world though
    you snooze you loose...
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sarcasm :)
    yeah i'm lettin' him have it khasm...just givin' him what he deserves...
     
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    "because i'm deep, inside of love you see"
    Love conquers all...Seems you found it....
    Now conquer!!! Let him have it!!!!
     
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    Poetic, Lovely, Golden One!

    Congratulations, a poet is to be wed!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe here
    dis speaks out u know !!!
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, yeah i found it alright :) thanks ndeep :)

    awwwwwwww thanks 1poet :)

    thanks so much rich :)
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    very...very nice.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot :)
     
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