Black Poetry : for you....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rico, Jun 27, 2003.

  1. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see the sun...peeking out from the clouds...
    it's all because you opened my eyes...to a new day...
    I can hear the birds singing in the morning...
    it's all because you opened my ears...to hear your words of wisdom...
    I can smell the freshness of the summer breeze...
    it's all because you...helped me to breathe again...

    I don't know who you are...our paths have never...
    crossed on the street..I don't even know what you
    look like...But you see that really doesn't matter
    to me....

    Because of you...I get up in the morning...
    looking forward to a new day...searching for your...
    words of wisdom on this page....enjoying each and
    every line you write...grining from ear to ear the moment...
    your name appears.

    Thank You!

    ;)
     
  2. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm loving this piece... whoever that somebody is has really stirred beautiful inspiration w/n ya... keep it flowing :)...

    peace
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like that special kind of feeling appearing...mmm...wonderful
    Peace
     
  4. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin' this vibe fo sho Rico
    variation on Biggie smalls
    joint comes to mind
    I read some ladies in here
    that should be havin' my
    baby... baby...
    No disrespect ladies...
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see RICO again u pose another masterpiece
    i loved reading this one bruh !
    tyte
     
  6. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rico,

    I read your piece and couldn't help think is there someone out there thinking this about my work, do they really feel it or are there comments just empty replies...Keep writing poet...

    Nahshon
     
  7. LibertyLady

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    wauw thats beautifull if someone has this beautifull effect on you:spin:

    shure its the holy spirrit whom works trough people somethimes:sand:


    i realy like this peace,,,there is nothing but love in it

    much love liberty
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont kno who you are talking about, but i wish i knew them. great flow... im feelin this...
     
  9. angelicsage

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    Rico, this is beautiful, such an air of mystery...but let it be known that there are no empty replies on this page from what I can see...we are your destee family and if we take the time to read and reply...your words are truly felt and we want to convey that to you...Much, much luv to you Rico! Great Flow!
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEAUTIFUL......and inspirational...i love it...