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  1. greeneyes

    greeneyes Member MEMBER

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    Know that if given the choice
    between six months of happiness with you
    or sixty years of a life without you in it
    I would choose the first option

    Be secure in the fact
    that you are the only man
    I wish to love for my remaining days

    If tomorrow should take you from our realm
    rest peaceful in the knowledge
    that your child will always have a home
    full of warmth and love

    For when I fell in love with you
    he became my son
    and even if he did not come from my flesh
    he is mine in my heart for always

    Realize that your passing will not have been in vain
    for even though I would not wish a life without you in it

    I would never willingly leave the children
    I made a promise to protect

    Your spirit will live on through him
    Your legacy fulfilled

    And when it is my time to join you in our mystical cove
    remember that it is a moment that I have been awaiting all along

    For you are my other half
    and no matter how great living may seem
    with a piece missing one is never complete

    You make me whole

    Separate we are but two parts

    Together we form one

    Destined the way
    forever is meant to be

    Until
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An Expression of Love

    I love the way' you conform to love
    And love the way you love
    The pen, so mightier
    Than the sword,
    I pray that u flow on-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed ya pen drip ink
    intently i listen coz u express love
    ummmm! so well
    flow on please tell da story as it unfold
    sho that love is a whole
    greeneyed dreamer ya on a roll.........Thanks 4 this one

    lovin' yo style indeed
     
  4. greeneyes

    greeneyes Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both very much :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful greeneyes I can surely relate to you in this one peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    you hold within you a love so complete. I admire you.
     
  7. greeneyes

    greeneyes Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both very much :)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most welcome green eyes...
     
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    This was beautiful...most definitely i hope u scribe on :)
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Real hot 4real
    very beautiful, greeneyes
    so touching
     
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