Black Poetry : For Us

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 31, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As if dreams were not enough
    Waking reality is just as sweet
    The honored reciever of your love
    I glow
    The leather of my soles
    Unscuffed
    Clean
    I never walk
    I move
    Guided by love's will
    Powered by the engine called your smile
    I can feel no better
    I can ask for nothing more
    So satisified
    So in love with you
    If I can kiss the palm of your hand
    Place it gently on my face
    I will be suspended forever
    The world will leave me
    Drifting alone in your love
    Feeling all that is warm and right
    So beautiful the consequence
    For my submission to us
    Let it be

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    "as if dreams were not enough...waking reality is just as sweet"...

    my eyes are smiling in my morning...this 'peace' shall take me softly into this day! :)

    thank you Poet

    a
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I"m with Ms. A on this....floating into midday with this love note

    *bliss*

    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DISPLAY OF REALITY

    GOT ME WALKING DOWN THE HIGHWAY OF LOVE
    U FLOW HEAD ON!:D
     
  5. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Totally

    Sweet.....
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the magic...

    in your poems touches
    its reader to the core
    of their soul...

    BE poetry style~
     
  7. Desert Storm

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    Dreams are

    So sweet!
    Desert Storm
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bruce, this piece is so beautiful. i enjoyed every word of it, dear poet.