Black Poetry : for u

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 5, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hug myself
    in your absence

    spending time
    by the fireplace
    brings back your
    heat…

    your love is
    white hot dancing inside
    the burning lights

    I look closer
    I see your eyes
    feel them penetrate
    the secret place
    I didn’t know existed
    until
    you touched it

    deep

    your face appears
    love ~ laced &
    enraptured
    as you explore
    the downy folds
    of my stronghold…

    eyes closed
    I rehearse the gentle
    command of your
    movements… the strong
    tender press of
    your hands...
    remember our words

    and hug myself
    in your absence

    Alyce, 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ITS AMAZING WHAT U SEE AND FEEL
    WHEN YA SIT BY THE OPEN FIRE
    AS YA SOUL YEARN THE LOVE OF HE
    WHOM BE OF ABSENCE YET WITHIN...
    ALYCE DES HIT TOP CHART AND AT A 10+
    U GO GURLLLLLL!!!!! MO/LUV
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    I'm smilin' on this beautiful, beautiful flow!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  4. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooh girl

    the way you touch that man! woooooooooo!

    :hot:

    CELA
     
  5. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce

    you're LIVING your best romance, aren't you my sista?

    Beautifully done...everytime you scribe I get a glimpse at what heaven must be like for a very fortunate brotha. :wink:

    You keep me in awe.

    saleem

    (when you gon' publish?)
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MS A...

    my dear sweet sister...

    love becomes you... & you wear it so well!

    love on Queen... love on! :)

    AlwaysPeace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. Alyce, this is what I call love sis:

    "white hot dancing inside the burning lights"

    Amazing what being in love does for the mind, heart, body and soul.


    One
     
  8. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stop that

    feeling your flow sometimes you have to go auto-solo, missing the one you touch the right spots
     
  9. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    vintage Alyce...

    (siggggh)

    Bert
     
  10. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nasty little luv bug U!!! Big up!